It was raining outside,
Droplets were kissing the roof.
They were breathing, sighing
and singing aloof.
I placed my palm forward,
but the rain water seeped away.
Even it didn’t stay,
Just chose to keep me at bay.
And suddenly a dew drop,
rolled out of my eyes.
I took it on my palm,
to see deep inside.
And how surprised I was,
to see a whole ocean on my palm.
An ocean of feelings,
carrying turbulence in a way so calm.
Oh! I ran outside,
to express my unexpressed pain.
Alas, my ocean,
seeped away with the drops of the rain.
Do you know what I’ve been saying?
Did you see my ocean seeping away?
Can you decipher my words?
For words don’t say a thing, they never ever say ….
g8
A common feeling brilliantly expressed.
Hey mits…. simply amazing!!! got to make a song on these two…. will be briliant!!
hey mitae wud say the way u hav put the emotions and feelings thru the poem is an imagination with reality whose depth is being revealed wid each line of ur poem..its simply impressing..do continue writing..luv pragya
it’s amazing . u never told abt ur this g8 talent.
akhay
Wow.. these lines are wonderful .. Keep it up ….
-Amit
not so good poems
sorry
Oh dear! you are funny. i like it